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Sentence Combining
Practice 10: Sentence-Combining Option #3
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To combine sentences using the third sentence-combining option, join two related independent clauses of equal importance with a semicolon, a conjunctive adverb, and a comma to form a compound sentence.
Complete Idea: Odysseus sees Cyclops.
Complete Idea: Cyclops does not see Odysseus.
Compound Sentence:
Although sentence-combining option #1 could be used, it has a less formal tone:
Odysseus sees Cyclops, but Cyclops does not see Odysseus.
Notice that both independent clauses are related: they discuss two characters in The Odyssey. Also, a semicolon, a conjunctive adverb, and a comma only join two clauses when each one is independent and can stand alone.
Consult the following table for clarification of conjunctive adverbs:
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Common Conjunctive Adverbs or Transitional Expressions |
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Conjunctive Adverbs |
Meaning
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Example |
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consequently |
as a result |
The business expenses exceeded the income for two years; consequently, the company went bankrupt. |
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furthermore |
in addition |
She supported her point with convincing evidence; furthermore, she addressed everyone’s concerns. |
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however |
in contrast |
The crew cleared debris all morning; however, the road was still not clear by the afternoon. |
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in fact |
in reality |
Elinore loves taking pictures as a hobby; in fact, she wants to pursue a career as a wildlife photographer. |
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indeed |
certainly |
Two warning lights came on; indeed, the pilots became concerned. |
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moreover
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in addition |
Spot-billed pelicans need legal protection; moreover, they need sanctuaries. |
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nevertheless
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in contrast |
Fierce winds swept across the sand dunes; nevertheless, the camels pressed on. |
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then |
after that |
The wall fell; then, the neighbors started talking. |
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therefore |
as a result |
The soldier saved fourteen lives; therefore, the military awarded him a medal of honor. |
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* The acronym FINCHMITT may help you to remember the nine conjunctive adverbs or transitional expressions. |
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Additional conjunctive adverbs and transitional expressions include the following: accordingly, also, at least, besides, certainly, conversely, finally, for example, hence, instead, likewise, meanwhile, no doubt, nonetheless, of course, on the other hand, otherwise, perhaps, similarly, still, subsequently, and thus (for more transitional expressions see Chapter 10). |
Instructions:
Insert a semicolon before the conjunctive adverb and a comma after it in the following sentences.
Example question: The captain put gasoline in the boat then the passengers came aboard.
Example answer: The captain put gasoline in the boat; then, the passengers came aboard.
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